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PostSubject: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 4:53 pm

Finally! after a ton of hard work Benk444 and I proudly present blue spirit!

I know that not much was expected from this collab at first but I believe this will blow your mind!

I hope we exeeded you expectations!

also please watch on YT and comment if your nice! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KsmfjwT9uBU

without further ado i give you OUR track Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:04 pm

I already watched it. You know. Razz
Like I said, there is room for improvement.
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:04 pm

What do u think we need to improve?
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:08 pm

For you, the compact parts and not over using nose flings.
For GLR, nothing much, but it could improve a little bit in all aspects.

EDIT: Oops, I forgot to grade it...
69/100 (Lol) 8D
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:12 pm

can u tell us what r grading scale looked like?
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:14 pm

Thanks SS i will work extra hard from now on Smile were gettin up there!
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:23 pm

benk444 wrote:
can u tell us what r grading scale looked like?

Ugh, I guess... I hate typing it out though, it takes so long. Razz

Tricks: 17/25
Flow: 10/25
Originality: 10/15
Neatness: 8/10
Smoothness: 12/15
Stall: 4/5
Length: 5/5
Entertainment: 3/5

The flow is my main problem, as you can see. GLR had the flow going well and then Benk pretty much stopped all flow.
Remember, I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just trying to help you improve.
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:29 pm

i tired slowing it down because then we wood pick it up rite back, it was going too fast Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Blue spirit   Blue spirit EmptyFri Oct 09, 2009 5:30 pm

Hey thats not so bad i can see better in the future experienced is something to be proud of Very Happy and thanks for taking the time to show us the FULL grade SS it really helps me understand what to work on Smile I think benk444 did really exceptionally well for being an "on-off" track maker. everyone give benk a clap Very Happy
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