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PostSubject: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 6:13 pm

I need help decidin a name for my up coming track, its all blue

Enjoy!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 6:20 pm

Name: grr... I'll come back to you... xD
On another note: Nice track man! Very Happy I liked it!!!!! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 6:21 pm

haha thanks

i need every1 too help me pick out a name
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 7:09 pm

copy from YT:
the track is lookin great Smile i dont have a name suggestion for you though sorry Sad I have a suggestion though you should really work on making him go all directions you got left and right a little but add in some more up so its not all down

~Grading~

Tricks: ( 12 / 25 )
~Reason:You had some nice variation between flings but they are all going downhill and the pull isnt super strong yet still noticable. try to throw in some manuals here and there too Smile
Flow: ( 15 / 25 )
~reason:It was going very nice and smooth at first then it had one flow killer by hitting a horizontal line picked up speed then did it again its a thing to work on but you have improved from our collab Very Happy
Originality: ( 5 / 15 )
~reason:This is a pretty common trend in tracks that they got in a downward direction that is mainly the reason
Neatness: ( 8 / 10 )
~reason: It was actually really neat lines for the most part there were a few lines that were out in the middle of nowhere that killed the neatness part but still a major improvement
Smoothness: ( 12 / 15 )
~reason: Pretty much the same bosh wasnt "jerked around" very much and it gave it that calm feeling
Stall: ( 0 / 5 )
~reason: no stall this will obviously be fixed when this is officially released Razz
Length: ( 2 / 5 )
~reason: its short but it had nice variety so entertaining. It will also be fixed when it is officially released Razz

Final Score: 54/100

Mid Mediocre
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 7:17 pm

thanks, my track will be comin out shortly, i will improve all those things Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 11:00 pm

Name: LAST (Love Abundantly Speedy Tracks)
You are improving at an extreme rate. If you keep this up, you will eventually be an exclusive rider! Very Happy
Just work on flow, as in keeping the speed from being sporadic. Ex: Fast, medium, fast, slow, fast. Get it?

EDIT: Oh and GLR, don't grade previews. I moved it to shorts, where it belongs.
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyMon Oct 12, 2009 3:54 pm

dude SS thanks, i will call it LAST! Very Happy u no, i have never thought of that haha, thanks for the motivation... i will work on flow
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyTue Oct 13, 2009 6:59 pm

SS, i need help, i accidently killed the flow, i will do bad now.. it picks right back up but i killed the flow...
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyTue Oct 13, 2009 8:18 pm

Then redo it? Lol...
Record it and show it to me, it's probably not that bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyTue Oct 13, 2009 9:53 pm

You will do fine like I said dont think too much just go with the flow and it should flow get how it should work? you will catch on soon you have great improvement faster than i have seen so dont worry you will get it one day
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyWed Oct 14, 2009 12:28 am

That was way too downwards, and I think I saw some trampoline lines in there.

Other than that it was good.
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyWed Oct 14, 2009 3:35 pm

i promise, there are no trampoline lines, all blue.. i can prove it to u if u want Surprise/Baffed
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PostSubject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track)   Unbound Preview (all blue track) EmptyThu Aug 12, 2010 9:28 pm

i will improve all those things

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