Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:13 pm
I need help decidin a name for my up coming track, its all blue
Enjoy!!!
Orangturttle Rank Mod
Posts : 95 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 27
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:20 pm
Name: grr... I'll come back to you... xD On another note: Nice track man! I liked it!!!!!
EROS Child
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:21 pm
haha thanks
i need every1 too help me pick out a name
GLR UR Member & Rank Mod
Posts : 123 Join date : 2009-09-12 Age : 29 Location : the northern union
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 7:09 pm
copy from YT: the track is lookin great i dont have a name suggestion for you though sorry I have a suggestion though you should really work on making him go all directions you got left and right a little but add in some more up so its not all down
~Grading~
Tricks: ( 12 / 25 ) ~Reason:You had some nice variation between flings but they are all going downhill and the pull isnt super strong yet still noticable. try to throw in some manuals here and there too Flow: ( 15 / 25 ) ~reason:It was going very nice and smooth at first then it had one flow killer by hitting a horizontal line picked up speed then did it again its a thing to work on but you have improved from our collab Originality: ( 5 / 15 ) ~reason:This is a pretty common trend in tracks that they got in a downward direction that is mainly the reason Neatness: ( 8 / 10 ) ~reason: It was actually really neat lines for the most part there were a few lines that were out in the middle of nowhere that killed the neatness part but still a major improvement Smoothness: ( 12 / 15 ) ~reason: Pretty much the same bosh wasnt "jerked around" very much and it gave it that calm feeling Stall: ( 0 / 5 ) ~reason: no stall this will obviously be fixed when this is officially released Length: ( 2 / 5 ) ~reason: its short but it had nice variety so entertaining. It will also be fixed when it is officially released
Final Score: 54/100
Mid Mediocre
EROS Child
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 7:17 pm
thanks, my track will be comin out shortly, i will improve all those things
Sirstep Administrator
Posts : 150 Join date : 2009-09-14 Age : 29 Location : G-Town
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:00 pm
Name: LAST (Love Abundantly Speedy Tracks) You are improving at an extreme rate. If you keep this up, you will eventually be an exclusive rider! Just work on flow, as in keeping the speed from being sporadic. Ex: Fast, medium, fast, slow, fast. Get it?
EDIT: Oh and GLR, don't grade previews. I moved it to shorts, where it belongs.
EROS Child
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Mon Oct 12, 2009 3:54 pm
dude SS thanks, i will call it LAST! u no, i have never thought of that haha, thanks for the motivation... i will work on flow
EROS Child
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:59 pm
SS, i need help, i accidently killed the flow, i will do bad now.. it picks right back up but i killed the flow...
Sirstep Administrator
Posts : 150 Join date : 2009-09-14 Age : 29 Location : G-Town
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Tue Oct 13, 2009 8:18 pm
Then redo it? Lol... Record it and show it to me, it's probably not that bad.
GLR UR Member & Rank Mod
Posts : 123 Join date : 2009-09-12 Age : 29 Location : the northern union
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:53 pm
You will do fine like I said dont think too much just go with the flow and it should flow get how it should work? you will catch on soon you have great improvement faster than i have seen so dont worry you will get it one day
StingDaFling Rank Mod
Posts : 34 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : in a box
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Wed Oct 14, 2009 12:28 am
That was way too downwards, and I think I saw some trampoline lines in there.
Other than that it was good.
EROS Child
Posts : 148 Join date : 2009-09-19 Age : 29 Location : GA
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:35 pm
i promise, there are no trampoline lines, all blue.. i can prove it to u if u want
mafiafran Bloody Baby
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-08-12 Age : 54 Location : Philadelphia
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:28 pm
i will improve all those things
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yobanjojoe Infant
Posts : 36 Join date : 2009-10-23 Age : 27 Location : Australia
Subject: Re: Unbound Preview (all blue track) Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:10 am